Suggested typographical corrections in blog post

k7aay · Posted on: Sun Jan 03, 2010 4:46 am

Grammar gremlins suggest these changes to
http://jpaerospace.com/blog/2009/07/27/airbeam-development-55-psi/

Expectation were high for big rib test.

Suggest adding the missing article of speech:

Expectation were high for the big rib test.

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What was that all about.

Suggest change to read:

What was that all about?

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A three foot section of the rib was completely shredded, we were done for the night.

Suggest change to:

A three foot section of the rib was completely shredded, so we were done for the night.
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The next day, Saturday we put the beam through it’s paces.

Suggest change [color=#FF04000]it's[/color] to its

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The next day out of shear frustration we cleared the day and decided to fix this problem.

Suggest change [color=#FF04000]shear[/color] to sheer

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The result was light ribbon loop around the beam, bit NOT attached in anyway to the beam. Ribbon banding, or ribs on the rib.

Suggest change to:

The result was light ribbon loops around the beam, but NOT attached in anyway to the beam; ribbon banding, or ribs on the rib.

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Many thanks for doing the work and keeping the dream in the air!

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k7aay Spaceflight Enthusiast Joined: Sun Jan 03, 2010 4:27 am Posts: 3	Suggested typographical corrections in blog post Posted on: Sun Jan 03, 2010 4:46 am Grammar gremlins suggest these changes to http://jpaerospace.com/blog/2009/07/27/airbeam-development-55-psi/ Expectation were high for big rib test. Suggest adding the missing article of speech: Expectation were high for the big rib test. - What was that all about. Suggest change to read: What was that all about? - A three foot section of the rib was completely shredded, we were done for the night. Suggest change to: A three foot section of the rib was completely shredded, so we were done for the night. - The next day, Saturday we put the beam through it’s paces. Suggest change [color=#FF04000]it's[/color] to its - The next day out of shear frustration we cleared the day and decided to fix this problem. Suggest change [color=#FF04000]shear[/color] to sheer - The result was light ribbon loop around the beam, bit NOT attached in anyway to the beam. Ribbon banding, or ribs on the rib. Suggest change to: The result was light ribbon loops around the beam, but NOT attached in anyway to the beam; ribbon banding, or ribs on the rib. - Many thanks for doing the work and keeping the dream in the air! _________________ -- 73s & best regards de K7AAY CN85qj PDX USNG: 10T ER 3007628876 (NAD 83) Let's do the math: CO2 is 3.42% of all greenhouse gases. Man-made CO2 is 3.2% of all CO2. 0.0342 * 0.032 = 0.1% So, if all the planet went 100% nuclear + solar power _tomorrow_, greenhousing drops by 1/10 of one percent. Should CO2 shedding stop 100%, another greenhouse gas would replace it; dihydrogen monoxide, which we cannot control (it absorbs 20X more IR in the same spectrum).
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Terraformer Space Station Member Joined: Sun Dec 30, 2007 6:16 pm Posts: 314	Re: Suggested typographical corrections in blog post Posted on: Sun Jan 17, 2010 7:44 pm John Powell isn't good with grammar, and he doesn't have a proof-reader. If you get Floating to Space, you'll find loads.
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k7aay Spaceflight Enthusiast Joined: Sun Jan 03, 2010 4:27 am Posts: 3	Re: Suggested typographical corrections in blog post Posted on: Sun Jan 17, 2010 8:08 pm So, how can one volunteer to proofread for JP? They also serve who only sit and blue-pencil... I hope. John Bartley K7AAY PDX _________________ -- 73s & best regards de K7AAY CN85qj PDX USNG: 10T ER 3007628876 (NAD 83) Let's do the math: CO2 is 3.42% of all greenhouse gases. Man-made CO2 is 3.2% of all CO2. 0.0342 * 0.032 = 0.1% So, if all the planet went 100% nuclear + solar power _tomorrow_, greenhousing drops by 1/10 of one percent. Should CO2 shedding stop 100%, another greenhouse gas would replace it; dihydrogen monoxide, which we cannot control (it absorbs 20X more IR in the same spectrum).
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